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I need to make my anamatic clearer by outlining the pencil In my story board with a black pen and taking the photos closer up so I do not have to crop it as much thus it won't be as pixelated and it will be easier to see the anamatic. Also I need to change my storyboard slightly by evaluating other cross cutting sequences because there is usually a pattern to the technique for example in the chorus there are usually more shots of the band. This will be challenging but it will be worth it when I'm filming so I know exactly what needs to be shot and when. Hence I need to change my shot list slightly.